For the elevator pitch, things that stood out to me where the idea of grabbing the audiences’ attention. This can be done by giving the audience an eye-opening scenario when the pitch is started which allows for the audience to be easily engaged. The thing that I changed versus the first elevator pitch was my approach to engage the audience and my body language.
#Assignment 17
OFF The Lot Reviews 
I can tell your pitch improved when you changed the hook at the beginning of your pitch. The only note I have is your pitch was a little long considering you basically used the entire time you were allotted and I didn’t think it was necessary to explain your product. I felt like you talked a little too slow during your pitch and that may have contributed to you using almost the whole time.
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